GingerLizzy

This is lovely and it tended to flow really well. If this was an actual song that was out, I'd definately buy it because I like songs that have meanings ...

Welcome to YWS Jordan! For help, ask anyone really because they're super helpful and I don't mind helping. [If I can that is ^^] If not, find one of the ...

Welcome to YWS!!! [Does the welcome dance, with her pants on her head] If you need help, I'm happy to, or just find one of the helpful mod elves, with ...

Ooh, this is a bit doody isn't it! I like, I do. Looks like some sort of virtual reality thing... O.o or maybe even like.. a golden Silver Surfer! Fabulous.

Quite good, with a good meaning behind the poem, which I enjoyed. Remember to proofread your work before you post so that you can check for mistakes and also so ...

Hmm... My definition of these words is life. Mainly because they are in everyone's life and sometimes they even wreck and ruin lives. So yeah, I'm simple and that is ...

Not too bad, but not great either. Imagary was good in places; flow was okay in places; but the poem was too long and it became tedious to read. Maybe ...

Proof read. Punctuation. And structure. These are three things that troubled me when I read this and I think you should review them all, before you post. [Proofread them] The ...

Not much information is given on here... Why? Did you leave it so that you can continue in another piece? If so, then nevermind but if not, then maybe you ...

I stood beneath the shower head and let the hot water wash away the stresses of the past two hours, condensing it into a steam that slowly rose, uplifting my ...

We could wear really big chunky high heels and put tons of make up on and be like.. all classy then flash a crayon drawn ID. XD

Matt is a helpful little elf ^^

6/10 It's mysterious and cool, but there's not much colour.

I liked this and it was good, but it wasn't fantastic. The storyline behind the poem is good and throughout the poem, you use a lot of emotion so that ...

Ooh, I liked this. Good imagary and flow and the sructure was different, so that's always a nice change. ^^