GingerLizzy

I'm not so sure I liked the concept, but I'm not a fan of the depressing poems and stories. I felt as though, before we reach the end, the poem ...

The statement you want, the incredible thought, is hiding behind the stiff headache you've got. This part didn't work well for me, as I didn't like how you rhymed 'thought' ...

This is the sequel to my short story "I could talk to you forever" same characters :D. **************************** Prom night, Jack thought, she’s either going to kill me, or say ...

Short and full of emotion, although I cant help but wonder whether or not this would be better as a poem, as it seems to have that kind of effect. ...

Seriously.. Someone did once tell me to find a new hobby. In fact, I shall name and shame; Incandescence on my poem "Rage of an Infantile Mind". His direct quote ...

[Fans her face a little] Phew, this is a little steamy. I liked it though, although I thought there wasn't really much information about the two for it to feel ...

I liked the story line but I have to admit, it is not really the most interesting and it seems I have read it all before. Nevertheless [is that even ...

Now, this is not about the piece that you have written, as I did not read it. I didn't read it because of the structure. Why have you placed it ...

Wow Every single one is great and I loved how they were just randomly done, like the telescope thingies, which made me laugh too. I love your doggie. She is ...

Orange [Hyperventilates] It's like.. GINGER This is right good to be honest. Abstract and it definately fits in with the title - good choice by the way! Fabulous

I agree with Claudy when I say that I dont actually understand what you are trying to say in this poem. But I liked the flow, rhythm and rhyme which ...

I am very sad to say that I agree with the others when I say; what were you thinking? The structure; all wrong and it just doesn't work, messing up ...

This is fabulously simple and short. It made me laugh and want to read it all over again - which I did, because I'm a loon. What I will say ...

The only thing I am going to say is; Dont use the how to draw books... This is not because these drawings are bad - they're actually quite good, as ...

Hmm.. I wouldn't call this bland to be honest and I think it is actually quite good, considering it is your first post. I like the 'Voyage Fantastic' part and ...