GingerLizzy

This is written beautifully, but I am not sure about the structure of this poem. I didn't really like it, as it seemed to mess with the flow and made ...

8.5/10 I like things refering to sanity.

I am also a "liker" of this poem. I know that makes no sense, but it does to me. Cruel to be kind and all that, as the girl is ...

He looked across the table, With confusion and with woe. His blue eyes dull like iron, Like the sun they once did glow. I told him that I worried, Let ...

[Jumps about] HIIIII!! Welcome to YWS and it is super here. You'll enjoy it lostly!

Not too bad, with a great idea. But, the repetition annoys me somewhat and made it boring to read after five or six lines. Your structure was okay, but not ...

Grammar. Punctuation. These need to be checked before any post - that's why the spell checker it there! - and then you need to read through your own piece and ...

I think the only reason I'm saying that I didn't like this, is because perhaps I don't have the mental ability to actually, understand it and I'm shamed to say, ...

Okay, this is good but I'm not entirely sure about the repetitive nature of the word"if". It is just oo much and especially seen as though the title is "If", ...

[Whisltes the "Twilight Zone" theme song] This is very techno and it's like.. WHOA! I loves it to be honest, and it's not even orange. Gosh. I love how it's ...

Well.. You are an honour to know and have all of the ginger folk's respect. [Dances with her pants on her head] Although, some may be frightened by this. ^^

Views on this. A young three year old girl has been found, crying and confused on Saturday, after being abandoned by her father at a Melbourne train station. Staff of ...

But if someone enjoys doing something, that doesn't mean they should be serious about what they are doing. I do wish to be serious about writing, but if I'm honest, ...

I have green eyes too, but maybe that's because I have orange hair. =] You seem interesting.

I watched this once, a programme called Jeremy Kyle had the woman on the show. I think she's a bit silly if I'm honest. I'd dislike all the press coverage.