GingerLizzy

Hmm.. Not bad actually You use good imagary and such, and it tends to have a good flow, although sometimes this is out of whack and tends to just... stumble ...

Update: Police in New Zealand and now the US are searching high and low for young Xue's father, when he was believed to have flew across to the Us after ...

Update: The spokesman for the MaCann family has declared that the parents of the young girl - Madeline - are totally innocent and that the police should focus more on ...

Not bad, quite good, not great. Liked the concept but I guess I couldn't get to grips with the flow.

I liked this. The referral to the fence keeping the gardens apart made me think of worlds that are far apart, like the rich and the poor maybe? The structure ...

I like these, they're different and unique. My favourite was the first, of the boots. I liked how the pictures seemed random, but then they totally seemed planned. It's quite ...

I cant see any of your pictures =[ I bet they're super though

Wow, this was really good and funny. The only complaint is that sometimes the structure was like wading in super glue. Other than that, super work here.

This was a deicious new change to what I would normally read and to say that it is your first post on here, it wasn't too bad. I'd consider a ...

This is good, very.. I'm not sure.. But good. Graphics work better for me to be honest. Good work.

I have to admit, it's not my normal kind of poem. But, I liked this, it was different and structured well. Good work for capturing my attentions.

Ooh, I like these Especially the coffee one. Super cool.

[Tries to reach for that one last glimmer of happiness, then it's gone, swallowed by the giant they call... EMO] Now, this is personal preference but I didn't like that ...

Loved the concept to be honest, but again; your structure seems all wrong? Where are the other pieces of punctuation, the variation from the comma and period? Without these, it ...

I love this with a passion I think. But, even though it is actually two people dancing - right? - at a first glance, I thought it was two people, ...