GingerLizzy

I stood beneath the large and twisted oak tree, that shadowed the doorway of Adel's tucked away haven, watching the house from afar, afraid that if I got any closer ...

Hmm.. I liked this to be honest. It was.. I'm not sure of the word... Dainty? Quiaty? I haven't a clue what word it is - I am a goose ...

Hmm.. 6/10 I like the abstract-ness.. But there's not much colour

Indifferent springs to mind when it comes to my feelings about this. I'm not all to with the French scene, I must admit and it made me confused - what ...

I agree with Matt on the originality scale - let's just say, I've seen this, I've read that and I've got the eye strain to prove it. If you're going ...

I liked this, it flowed well and had some great imagery that really helped me feel the emotion and meaning behind this piece. I agree that you should scrap on ...

This is awful; Why on earth would you bite your dog?! I don't even agree with the diciplinary tap on the nose or side, let alone the bite the oor ...

7/10 =] Not bad mon amis

I liked this, the rhythm was pretty good and I liked the meaning behind it. In some lines though, you tend to cram them full of syllables that are not ...

Cliche. I liked this, but I've read it all before - low on the originality scale. It would be nice to see you change this into something of your own.

[Hides] Scawwy =[ But good ^^

Loved this. Your imagery was really good and the flow and emotions that ran from it sank in so I could reaaly feel them. Your repetition of the waterfall line ...

I liked the imagery in this and thought that you described the snow and it;s actions in a way that we can all picture easily in our minds - even ...

This is actually fantastic, the idea of the ghosts being memories - right? I liked this because I'm into the whole supernatural thing and have heard that some house don;t ...

I think the concept and meaning behind this poem was good, but I am sorry to say the way you wrote it just didn't put your point across well enough. ...