GingerLizzy

Fabulous ^^

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I love Black and White photos They're better than colour 'cause you use your imagination to fill in the colours. I loved the one of the eye. Was very good.

Whoa. Loved this if I'm honest, it's so simple but yet so complex with perhaps a number of reasons depending on the reader. I liked the shortness if I'm honest ...

I agree.. It's pretty short. I need more. More imagery and more information about the causes and stuff. Other than that, I can really quote on anything else as it ...

Not bad for a first post - mine was undoubtedly worse than this. I liked the concept but think you should work on structure and punctuation; I've just pointed out ...

Ah bonjour ^^ I tell ya' if you wanna improve, here is the place to be. People have said that my writing has improved a lot since I joined here ...

Wow, I liked this, but at first I was gonna complain 'cause I thought it was going to be one of those EMOtional and depressing poems that make me think ...

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Hmm.. I liked this actually. I loved the portrayal of the little girl - how she clambers up onto her mothers lap and literally climbs all over her when she's ...

Ooh.. Yummy. I loved this, it was so different and refreshing. It's not often when I read stories of a married couple, they all tend to be of blooming relationships ...

Y'know, the first set down to the girl with the umbrella reminds me of Fruits Basket and to be honest, they seem to even follow that same theme, when they ...

Not bad, it ws readable. I liked some of your imagery and the structure was okay, but maybe you should concentrate on the rhythm so that when it is read, ...

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Now, I'm currently studying this is my English Literature class for my GCSE, along with Of Mice and Men , which we haven't started yet. I'm enjoying every second of ...