GingerLizzy

Wow I thought this was like from a boyfriend to a girlfriend so it was great to see that it was about someone's mother. I loved this idea, as it ...

Sea monkeys are these little fish type things.. Well actually I suppose you could say plankton. And you get a sachet of eggs and you put them in water and ...

I loved the first one; the imagery was deliciously dramatic and the flow worked well with both the small amount and the imagery. Good work. I'm not sure about the ...

Okay, so here is my critique, which will not be so long. I disliked this. This is because of the chosen words you have included in this piece and that ...

Just something silly, that I admit I didn't take seriously. I don't like writing poems that don't rhyme. Hehe ^^ Be nice. GingerLove ------ Lost remnants lay about the ground, ...

Ooh 7/10

I don't know about this. Some lines are really good and they create very good imagery and tension, such as when the author says that they now they are going ...

Ooh I like this. The water looks really still and I like how it;s kinda two toned. If that makes sense. I also like the fact that there is undergrowth ...

I'm going for your face. It explains all.

My gosh I love your name. Are you one of the ginger folk? If so, we'll be wonderful together. Hehe, see you around and don't be scared to ask for ...

I thought the flow in this went too fast, even when read slow. I don't know if that made sense but I think it refers to the syllables in each ...

Y'know.. Everyone is saying that they liked this and to my disappoint, I didn't to be honest. The imagery just wasn't enough for me and it didn't work well with ...

Ugh... I know how you feel and I'm sorry you had to go through this. It was written weel, but please - I exagerate this - don't block it all ...

Wow, this is really good. The imagery throughout was easy to work with and in my mind's eye, I could just see a ballroom full of people, masquerade style. It ...

I loved this actually, it made me think about my relationship with my own big sister; how they always do something which your mother tells you is wrong, but when ...