GingerLizzy

I don't think I can find the words to comment on this. I really do hope the children pull through.

Lorna Jones She coughed up the remnants of the sea from her lungs and looked around bleary eyed. The sun was brighter than she thought possible and her back was ...

They kill a lot of birds? Do you have any sort of source for this so I can read it and think how silly that sounds. I mean, it's not ...

Fortunately, aliens cloned all of the Earth's inhabitants and we thrived once more.

I'd be thankful if you could critique anything of mine really. You choose :]

Could you critique anything at all of mine? I'm not so fussed, but perhaps one of my poems would be best? Tarr, lovey. LOL, sorry that sounded cheeky.

Lorna Jones She scrambled for the light that was twinkiling at the surface of the water, as the boat created a sinking swell, pulling her further down under the murky ...

Oh, and could I post some links of another person's piece? I'm really raving over her story, but I don't think she's got the amount of reviews and praise that ...

Please could you critique my poem for meee? Anniversay; Ginge's poem ;)

There's plenty of views on this. I think it's pretty pointless to be honest, just like ASBO's, but that's another thread, huh? Another thing that could help this, yet not ...

Ha, this is cute. I liked your rhyming scheme and it had a nice playful flow to it. I could imagine this being in a Valentine's Day card though, because ...

Fortunately, the bear ended up getting in the back of the cop car, and attacked the cops, meaning that the family could escape once more.

Poncho :3

Ah, the squabbles between good and evil. Which side would you pick, if it were you? I think I'd pick evil actually; in a fatasy sense, because I'd love to ...

Well, I hope you get to your goal!