GingerLizzy

I must say, I don't really think this is a poem. It was good and the descrption was nice, but it just isn;t a poem I don't think. Perhaps ask ...

Oooooh This is really good actually. I liiked how the lines were sort of.. all over the place but structured well. If you get my drift. The position that the ...

You use a lot of long words Sage! ^^ I love the title of this first off - it's very mysterious and just plain super - and you seem to ...

I was gonna go and opt to play the violin at school, but it looked so confusing and strange that I opted for the subtle and heavy tenor horn. Oh ...

You have some good imagery in here but the happiness of it all actually scares me. Were you going through a mental break down when you wrote this - because ...

Howdy there. I'd be teririble as a gymnast - I cant even do a roly poly. Plus, by the sounds of it; it sounds dangerous! Hehe, hope your ankle is ...

I liked this, it flowed really well and it was structured fabulously, with a good rhythm. Although, when I got about three quarters of the way through the poem, I ...

Okay. so I agree with Aussie when she says that you should show and not tell - but I know how hard this is as I do it in almost ...

Well.. This was good if it was supposed to be silly and funny. Was it? I mean, you looked like an elf? That made me laugh but I didn;t understand ...

I agree actually. For a while, I had no pop up protection or any firewalls, so every second I was getting a lot of advertisements and pop ups that would ...

Oh my gosh 8/10 This made me laugh

What? I truly didn't understand this poem at all. Your friend's were cheery? Why were they? The flow was alright, I suppose but the imagery wasn't anything special; just simple ...

Oh my gosh, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this, it sounds super and you've structured it well. It's rather saucy though, isn't it? Hehe. I like how ...

I liked the concpet of this, I thought it was hard hitting and something that made me sit and think about how I feel about it. But, the flow didn't ...

In my opinion, homosexuals should have the exact same rights as hetrosexuals do, as the path that they choose is completely up to them and all it is is a ...