GingerLizzy

I actually really dislike this and I think I'm gonna just delete it and start over. I guess I was trying too hard; even I admit that. Gosh.

Oh right.. 11pm. Okay, that's not as bad as midnight I suppose.

Oh dear, you're not gonna go for that British midnight time are you? As I think we Britains are at a disadvantage at the miute with the whole call in ...

His voice is sweet like honey, Smooth and delicious. The beat of his heart; Creating the tempo for my fortress. "Do I make you feel safe?" "You make me feel ...

Gosh I just... What... I don't... Oh my. This.. Is... Great.

Wonderful. Although, like my autumn poem, it;s a bit littered with cliches and such; but it's still good. The flow was okay although I agree with KittyCat when she says ...

Hullo ^^ This site is super; you were there to witness the birth of YWS radio right? Yup, it's actually all fin and games here I think. I'm so un-interesting. ...

These are fabulous. I love the firsy, how she's sort of staring into space and daydreaming. About who I wonder? Anyhoo, I love how they look and did you use ...

Gah What's that British time Nate? Also, is it supposed to be on every night, or just every week? Is it posponed because of the technical difficulties?

Wow. This was really good and I thought that the rhythm and flow worked perfectly. I agree with Night when he says that it could be a little more hard ...

I like controversial poems and stories 'cause they tend to be really hard hitting anf make the reader think deeply about what they're reading instead of just reading it and ...

I have to shamefacedly echo the reviews of the others as they seem to have outlined the main points of needed improvement. I felt that in some places the flow ...

[coughs a little] Brad is just a big diva - ignore him [coughs a little] Anyway ^^ I liked this, although the structure was just too much. I need verse ...

I disagree with the posts above [there was no need for two really] and think that they are in fact, overly harsh on this, but we get used to that ...

For a first attempt, may I say confratualtions.