GingerLizzy

I agree with the whole title change; if you changed it it would give it a more ghostly feel because then the reader's imagination could run wild and they could ...

I liked this. I'm just getting into the Haiku world of poetry myself, but I'm not so good. Look up my work; Snowdrop, and you'll see what I mean. I ...

Oof, I'm not so sure about this. I don't think it's really, uhm.. anything? Actually I don't even know. When I reada poem, I tend to class it as something ...

Okay, good poem with a lot of emotion. I liked that! But - sorry, there is a but - the repetition of "You don't know me" bugged me slightly, because ...

May I say; hats off to you new member. This enthralled me entirely and I thought that it was just perfect for one of your first posts. The language which ...

Hmm... I don't like the stucture, that's one thing that hit me as annoying. Maybe it is personal preference, but in a whole, I don't think it is. Your work ...

This was actually quite good; I liked the whole concept, somehow, I found it quite phsycadelic. Not too sure about the flow though.

Love 'em

I like your name; it's doody. I'm Lizzy, but you can call me Ginge, Ginger, Liz, Lizzy, Elzabeth... Whatever. :) Feel free to PM me or just ask a helpful ...

Hey welcome! You've come to a great place to help improve your English writing; it's my first language and even I have learnt how to improve an awful lot! If ...

[Did the welcome dance with music and confetti] Welcome to YWS! You seem to have gone through quite a tough time; just think of karma. Things that happen in your ...

Halo 3? That Timewarp thingy? Quite cool. 7/10

Ha, this was good. Cute and rather lyrical. Nothing to complain about this time it seems; how happy would that make eveyrone if the critique said that all the time. ...

Hmm.. This wasn't too bad but I have to admit it wasn't the best. I'm not really sure how you could improve it though; the punctuation seems okay and so ...

This is actually pretty good :) I was impressed because even though you've used the traditional rhyming scheme - I use this a lot and now I'm growing fonder of ...