GingerLizzy

Ooh, the plot guru. I like the sounds of that. Welcome to YWS! Another person from England; how spiffing. What brought you to the site, apart from the fact that ...

Welcome to YWS! I love it when new people come along; it gets me all worked up. Feel free to PM me if you need any help, or just find ...

Okay, so I'm climbing onto my soap box to, not rant as such, but to ask everyone how they feel about the immigration laws and the state of people moving ...

[Shakes nervously] I haven't got a reply back yet; I posted four pieces of work. I hope I get in... To be published would just be amazing.

Okay, I scanned over this but I didn't really read it properly, so don't take my review to heart because I admit; I haven't reviewed it properly. I dislike the ...

This is good and hard-hitting; you've really captured what people are like today. I always say this to people because it's true; everyone nowadays revolves around their image and they ...

Not bad... I think. I didn't like the structure that much; I prefer the good structures of traditional sranzas compared to this - I feel as though it affects the ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

You sound like my cup of tea; Gosh I'm sure that sounds strange... What a thing to say to a new member. Anyhoo... [Coughed bemusedly] Okay, the name's Lizzy, or ...

I tend to just go on the computer if I'm honest. What a geek I am. Nah, I go to the park with friends and I read and generally... Just ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

I kinda like the rhythm in this, but if I'm honest, I didn't really find this as striking as I thought I would. When I read the first stanza, I ...

I liked this, it made me smile and think; whoa this is funny but also quite mellow at the same time. I like how you put the cotton buds as ...

Phew, this is powerful stuff you have here. Your imagery is beautiful and the flow, along with the meaning of the poem adds a real impact to the reader. I ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...