GingerLizzy

Brad, I have to say, you may be a harsh critique-uhm.. er, but you are a gentle poet. Oh the irony. I liked this, it was pretty easy to read ...

Kimmy, you make me green with envy! This is super, although I cant help but think ti would look better with a little more orange on the lion cub. I'm ...

Uhm, I have to say this is all way too deep for my liking. I am just a mere simpleton and when I read this, I knew that I needed ...

I very much liked this, I can say that honestly. The emotion you filled the piece with really gets through to the reader and I liked it so much that ...

Okay, I won't mention the whole Angle/Angel thing; I think that has been done enough. After reading your other poem, "Good Bye" and then moving onto this, I sort of ...

Hmm.. Welcome to YWS 'n' all that. Remeber to make four reviews for each post you make; or round about that. Now, I have to say I didn't like this ...

Oof, I'm in. Just checked my E-mail. The poem "Treacle" won me my place. :)

Is there? I searched and I have to say, I couldn't find it. Maybe I didn't look hard enough. :L

I didn't much like how you structured the poem, I must say. Why did you do that? The lines and indents make it seem broken and when it is read ...

"The following medical terms are used to categorize abortion: Spontaneous abortion (miscarriage): An abortion due to accidental trauma or natural causes. Most miscarriages are due to incorrect replica

Gah, I can't check and see if I'm in until I find some means of getting on my E-mail account. At school, Hotmail is banned from the system and I ...

I liked this; pretty good but I can't really comment any further. Not because I didn't like it or because I thought it could be better; but because I'm not ...

Whoa, this; I liked! I loved the rhythm and rhyming scheme of it all; it was really clever and the fact that it was only two small stanzas long didn't ...

Not bad, I don't think. But I had a problem with the whole idea; I have not a clue what you are trying to portray in this piece. Maybe it's ...

6/10 Hmm... Different