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Re: Make a Story :)
Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...
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Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately, when in jail he met a group who were breaking out of jail and they fled to Mexico.
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Adrift
Lorna Jones She had watched helplessly as David had left the dinner table, muttering about going to see what the captain was planning to do about it. She had never ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Known for writing "I Could Talk to You Forever". I loved it.
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Wind Farms
This struck up in my brain today on my way home from Lincoln. We were passing through the village of Laughton and plastered all over the place were posters saying ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Being a little loopy but loveable. :]
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Adrift
Lorna Jones The rain was now thundering onto the decks and the passengers watched from the restaurant like scared mice. Lorna was on her second coffee and third whiskey shot; ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment 1/2
Have you heard that you got a nomination for the best Action/Adventure category? I thought it was great and so thought I should come and tell you. I think you ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Pretending
This is actually a well written piece. I'm a little iffy about the lack of punctuation, not even the odd comma or full stop. Perhaps you could add some and ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: YWS Review Weekend--Makin' "Yo Story" Jokes Since
Sounds great really. A good chance for all those cobwebbed poems and stories to see the light of a review. :]
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Star Gazing On The Beach
I found this hard going to be honest. Your flow was a little jumpy in places and you jam packed some lines to contain a lot of complex similie combinations. ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Guitar at Midnight
This was good because of the passion that you infused into it. But, I'm a little iffy about the choice of words in some parts. Such as, you tend to ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Firearris in pastels
This is really good, but I think ou could make the hair more vibrant and 'alive', like Valor said. This would make it feel more, whoa. You used those pastels ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Featured Member for 3/7/2008 Thru 3/20/2008
Congratulations... and celebrations! [Dragged out Cliff from the cupboard]
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Are You Excited About The Journal?
Oof, Nate how cheeky of you. I can't wait actually. I got my letter confirming that he had recieed my contract and I actually stopped breathing for a while.. O.o
Mar 7, 2008
