Ginara

Thank you for the kind words :) I hope you continue to read when chapter two gets posted!

I loved the added detail! The more detail and description the better. I liked what bandgeek had to say about slowing down and letting us get to know the character, ...

I liked this story, and I very much agree with everything Lyrienne had to say about it, both the areas for suggestions and the areas of enjoyment. One thing that ...