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Re: deleted
i felt that this was a good piece of literature, and as all things are, there is room for improvement. most of the suggestions have already been made, and all ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Watching You
magnificent work, very well composed. you successfully made it clear that they were passionate about each other through very modest action, a skill that is not very common. all critiques ...
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Re: A Poem of Poems
They say a poem is the way the heart sings. They tell of songs sung with sweet words. They preach of love divine, and hero’s valor. Yet, as they bring ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
my knees became weak from the sense that my protection is now gone forever this was a magnificent poem, i really feel for you my friend. my only suggestion is ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Forgive Me
I can still hear the thunder, roaring from your lips. And I can still feel the lightning, striking in your fists. this poem was fantastic, i really enjoyed it. though ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Another one? Oh my~
salam aliekum my friend, im new to this place as well. perhaps i will get a chance to read some of your work one day
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: greetings
greetings to all my fellow writers out there. a friend of mine from school has referred me to this website after complaining about how few people take the time to ...
Jan 9, 2008
