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Re: Listen
I think its pretty :) Keep writing :P
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Live
I'm not sure why I wrote this :) But I had sudden inspiration. I really relate to it. I know it's not that great but I hope you enjoy it! ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Secret Kisses
Hey! This poem is really good! : ) It had really good rhyme. I don't quite understand the story but thats a good thing, it makes it more interesting and ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Long Live Life! :)
This poem is really good because it makes you think. I gives me the feeling that youve been wondering these things :) You have really good ryhmes and I like ...
Apr 24, 2011 -
Re: Ballroom
Thanks Laylie :) And thanks everyone for the reviews ^_^
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Rosy Painted Butterflies
Yeah you posted something!! When I read this I was like woah! I wish I could write this good :) hahha I shall read your other one now! :D
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Ternimal 'Sease
Naww your start is really sad, it was really personal and I ike how you made it sound like a four year old at the start:) This is a really ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: When life s***s on you with bricks
Hahaha your poem is so good! I love the ending :) 'When life shits on you with bricks, Pick them up and build a wall.' Its so clever and funny. ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Ballroom
I have been working on this for ages and I've been so wanting to post this :D I really hope you like it and understand it and please comment anything!! ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Frustration
I loved this story! I'm going to follow it!! Your amazing at writing, you should keep posting more :D I really liked how you made the two characters, and you ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Scared to Whisper
Yeah I liked your poem!!!! :) Its not a style I would usually read but I could really relate to it and I like your ending line "I'm still too ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Nature art!!
Wow your an amazing photographer! I love photography but I'm not very good at it :) Keep posting them :D
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: New Beginning...
I love your starting :) I never know what to write when starting something but you handled it well. I'm not a very experienced writer so I don't know what ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
This is a start to a story I'm writing. :) Please read and I hope you like itt!! :D Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl who lived ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Story of My Life
hahah thats heaps good! Ive never been much good at poetry and I admire yours :D It was funny aswell. It was about something that we all probably do often ...
Feb 11, 2011
