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Hello! I think this poem is great! you have really good rhyming words that don't seem forced at all. Theres a lot of emotion in it too=D I liked the ...

Hey! I think this poem is cute =) I actually like the way you put sometimes at the end of each stanza, its saying sometimes rain is like sometimes its ...

Its really well written...and sad :'(. Its really descriptive and really pulls you in. I thought it was good =) I'm not very good at story writing so I can't ...

This is really funny =D I liked reading it. Everyone should like it so you get a feature!! =)

Hello! Your poem is really good! You use a lot of words that I don't know the meaning of hahaha, thats a good thing =) I'm not sure how I ...

Thankyou everyone for the comments =D

Hey Laylie!! This is really pretty. It kindof made me sad but happy at the same time =) It gave you a lot of pictures in your head hahaha and ...

I think this poem is really pretty. It has a lot of imagry in it and emotion. It makes you happy when you read it =D I also think it ...

This poem is really prettyyy =) You put alot of emotion in it and repeating certain parts of it give it a good effect hahaha. It also had good rythm ...

I loved it! I especially liked the ending =D It had so much emotion in it!! It was also written in a different style that I've usually seen which makes ...

Wow you use big words!!! hahaha =) I liked your poem =D It had a lot of emotion in it and although I didn't fully understand thats okay because it ...

Its a good first poem!!! =D I think I understand the story, this is a good thing that its not too straight forward, you make it more interesting =) It ...

Helloo!! Your story is written really well : ) It seems like a real person. I like how you had the thoughts in her head and showed the emotions that ...

Hey! Your paintings are awesome :D I wish I could paint like that :)

Hey I'm really sorry for what happened. I hope your okay. I just wanted to say that this is a really sad and beautiful poem :) It has so much ...