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Re: Ghostly Attractions
~ It is a novel in the works, and I know that the grammar isn't the best right now, but I haven't really had time to edit it when I ...
Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:02 am -
Re: Books you loved more than the movie...
The Last Song by Nicholas Sparks had me crying like a baby, but the movie was HORRID! Not just because it had Miley Cyrus in it either, and she didn't ...
Fri Nov 12, 2010 7:02 am -
Re: Live It Up
What is with Society? Telling you what to do, who to be? Why can’t they just see I’m gonna be me? Live it up a little bit Don’t be the ...
Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:48 am -
Re: My Addiction's Core
Your poem may be raw, but that's just what makes it so great. I don't understand why some people expect a poem to get ripped to shreds when there isn't ...
Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:46 am -
Re: Red Silk Noose
I love this, and it really does draw the attention of a reader. Not only the title, but the entire poem, and that is something that I love. I don't ...
Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:24 pm -
Re: Glass Tears
Too dense to carry. My clasp is still strong enough. I will always cling with fire, but it will never suffice the craving, the ardor I feel with you. And ...
Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:18 pm -
Re: (If only you were) Mine
And I know that you can't feel the way that I feel for you. These dreams I have will never come true. The love I have I can't share with ...
Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:14 pm -
Re: All For Money
Hey there! This is a pretty good piece, but there was one bit that bugged me. emalily wrote:That person died of lung cancer It sounds like you're just carelessly saying ...
Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:06 pm -
Re: Who are you?
This is me Or is this life? This complicated orb Spinning ‘round and ‘round Like a carousel It Makes Me Lose Myself. The voices, They are driving me insane. Leave ...
Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:17 am -
Re: The Cry of Distress
I can't look at this logically, because I actually have tears in the corners of my eyes. It's amazing. Genius. Brilliant. It was written so well...I love it. - GhostlyImpressions.
Fri Oct 15, 2010 4:12 am -
Re: please don't go
Words from hate, slowly slide Pensive lips, this cant be right Guilty stares hold you tight Fighting will Please be alright Hold my hand, don’t let go I need you ...
Thu Oct 14, 2010 12:44 pm -
Re: A Reflection
First up: this is a really great poem; I mean honestly, it is. There is one tiny thing that might work a little differently if it were changed. You blame ...
Thu Oct 14, 2010 12:17 pm -
Re: A Reflection
First up: this is a really great poem; I mean honestly, it is. There is one tiny thing that might work a little differently if it were changed. You blame ...
Thu Oct 14, 2010 12:16 pm -
Re: Chapter 1
Eurgh. I feel so mean even writing this, and I shouldn't because I actually enjoyed it. I have one flaw with it that I may just pick you to pieces ...
Thu Oct 14, 2010 12:03 pm -
Re: Girl behind the mask
The smile and laugh is only a mask to fool the world, memories from the past haunt her as she sleeps she'll never love the way she once did, she ...
Thu Oct 14, 2010 11:54 am
