Gheala

Hello, I'm Gheala. I'm sometimes too harsh with the reviewing, but it's all for good reasons! :D ------------------------------ Gerald and Natalie did not try force a conversation as Pierce ate. ...

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Oh, I really liked this! You seem to be very talented, because this looks amazing. I just have a few remarks: -Have you noticed that the left eyes (her left, ...

I open a Word Document, and the cursor blinks at me. Unlimited pages and pages of blank space...and I can’t think what to say! A very nice opening. You describe ...

Alrighty! I'm no expert, but I have been drawing long enough to voice an opinion (Not that I CAN draw!) Hm... I think it's very good, but it only needs ...

Let me just say that I don't know the slightest bit of photography. I only take pictures of my favourite flowers and also some pictures of the sky when it's ...

That's really really good! I liked that very much. But I do think that you need to concentrate on your lines a little more. For instance, the lines in the ...

I stood up and looked around the place. It was a huge, white room. Not only was it huge and pure white, it was empty, completely empty. -You need to ...

I was desperate to find a place where I could write, get reviews and have some copyright protection. You won't imagine how many writing sites that boldly say that they ...

Looking around the room, she made out the place she was being held... I think we need a new paragraph here. The leg of the chair hit her heels. With ...

Cassie has not shut up the whole way home. Her teacher is great, she’s made friends, this new school is so much better. Glad she had so much fun. I ...

How could I ever thank you, each and every one of you? Thank you very much for those reviews. Come to think of it, I do think I need to ...

Do you think Julius is speaking too much here? Does this peace need more dialogues or to show her reaction and not tell them? Thanks for helping me. I truly ...

Hello. I'm Gheala. It was a long journey, but i finally go to the welcome sign of Tolehole. - Make the "i" capital. -Make it "went" instead of "go". Past ...

Hey. I'm Gheala. I don't remember most of that day... I remember getting off that boat... Onto an island; shell island... with assorted bushes and grasses throughout it's surface... I ...