Gheala

Hello, Omen! Gheala here! You've come to the right place, if you like drawing and writing. Make sure you post whatever you write or draw on this site and you'll ...

Well, obviously everyone already commented on the huge font you used. There is no need to use such a big font, while we clicked the link of your story to ...

Welcome! Are you joking? Don't apologize for reviewing from your phone! That means you do review and you don't slack just because you're not on your computer. That's very nice ...

Oh, that's a very good question! I love them both so very much! I use the computer when I have many thoughts that are rushing to my head too fast ...

Why are you lost? This site is absolutely so friendly! You'll make some wonderful friends who have an in-common with you. What's a better in-common that writing? Do you like ...

Hell, Gheala here! I'm sorry if you find me a harsh reviewer, but it's for good causes! ----------------------------- As far as James was concerned, he was willing to risk life ...

Is this a paragraph from chapter Two? Or it's the whole chapter? It's very very very short. A chapter is normally 10 pages or more. Try to expand the details, ...

Hello! Gheala here! Sorry if I'm too harsh somewhere in the review, but it's for good reasons! ----------------------------- I was kind of crawling around, although at an extreme speed. "Kind ...

Hello, Gheala here! I keep my childhood safe in an old green-lidded shoebox, the safe brown cardboard sides reminiscent of all those art projects and crafts, from cardboard houses to ...

Hello, Gheala here. Hm.. You obviously need to practice and write more poetry because that one wasn't quite good. A poem should be longer than this to deliver a nice ...

Hello, Plane! Welcome to YWS! First of all, you'll most certainly have fun here. And there is nothing wrong in disliking poetry. Even I don't like poetry all that much- ...

Don't you even be worried about your language. My first language isn't English, either. As time passes and as you receive reviews and new opinions about your writings, you'll surely ...

Welcome!! Well, if you love writing, then you sure came to the right place. You came in the right time as well. Right now, there are four reviewing teams that ...

Hello! Gheala here! ---------------------------------- Lying on the roof all was silent and all was dark; he could barely make out his surroundings in the blanket of thick black fog that ...

Hello! Gheala here! -------------------------------- It was a sunny day in March, I was chilled to the bone. I hadn't eaten,was defecient of starch, you left me to corrode, a statue ...