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:( Poor Luke. T.T He never had a real family! *clicks on chapter six with wide eyes*

You know what I absolutely love about your novel... You know, besides having realistic characters and a charming girl like that cute heroine? I love how they haven't fell in ...

I'm rewriting my novel right now, and I added a dream in chapter three. How long do you think it should be? I know it depends on how relevant and ...

The poet, walking slowly under the thin rain, climbed the rocky road that led up the cliff. He was mentally reviewing his life (I don't think 'Mentally reviewing' is literary ...

Hear my words, and run away. Don’t trust the shadows, and never stray. The monster will take you up, and make you his toy, a mindless puppet, and never again ...

Freaks! Intro: "W-what are you? The boy stammered, a shaky hand dropped the knife that used to be held firm for defense. "I saw it." The words were barely heard ...

Why don't you merge one and two together? It's your call, though. And good luck :D

For starters! Don't be surprised by the red lines here. You don't have that much mistakes, but I do tend to be talkative while reviewing. Lol. The red lines are ...

It was half way down the street when I saw the flashing lights I sped up. In front of my house was a ambulance and a cop car, my mom ...

I'm really glad you liked the writing style itself. I think that's the basis of a good novel, even though I do know that the excerpt is quite short. Thing ...

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Let's say I had a feeling I'll be getting a writer's block soon, so I decided to give a review. It usually clears my mind a little. So, let's start! ...

Whoa! Deep, refreshing and mature? I'm in love with that sentence

That was very nice of you to say... or write, in this case. Lol I'm so very glad you liked it, because the one talking in that piece is really ...

Weird, this is my FIRST post. In the annoying yellow light of my tiny room, I stared at the white paper spreading before me. Not knowing what to expect, I ...