Gheala

Pinko!!! I know we haven't talked in a VERY long time, and I do miss you a lot. Thank you, both of you. Strange thing was that when I started ...

I write to you this insight, which I consider to be highly insignificant, to pull out the contents of my bleak heart. No, this isn't a gloomy piece that would ...

SubjectBlue, do you think it's legitimate for Israeli soldiers to shoot Egyptian ones without a just cause? Try to know the real story, please, before you become too aggressive or ...

Yes, that's exactly why I apologized. I don't like accusing someone of something, unless it's in their faces and they could speak back. I have no idea whether he'd apologize ...

Nobody knows for sure. First, they said he has cancer, then they said he doesn't. But I say he's old and it's normal if he was ill. But during the ...

Alrighty! This is the second time I post this piece from my novel, but I do hope that the editing helped it become better. Here, Julius felt guilty and apologized, ...

Hello, hello! I so want to read this. ------------------------------------------ Wild yellow grass stooped under its own weight, sagging more and more as it got nearer to the edge of the ...

Another nasty argument between Jude and Aurora! Yes, this is a tiny excerpt from my novel. I'm sorry that I only post small pieces every now and then, but please ...

The red wine bottle was on the floor, the red liquid looked like blood as it pooled around the shards of glass. You used "red" twice here. You could make ...

Hello! Gheala here. --------------------------------- The trials is a test that Guardian initiates undergo to test their skill. The first test covers magic ability and knowledge. The second test cover

Welcome! I love action and adventure too! A few months ago, I was way too much into paranormal romance- stuff like Twilight and so on. -.- I got fed up ...

Hahaha! I just loved it! I was singing it while I read it! It was beautiful and it made me laugh. Now I'm happy and you just made my day! ...

Hey! For a first try, this isn't bad at all. In fact this is amazing for a first try. My first manga character looked terrible! Hm.. Let's start! Remember, it's ...

Aww! :( Why would you want to leave YWS? It's such an amazing and helpful site! But surely, you didn't give yourself a chance to get used to the site ...

Welcome to YWS! And yes, we're all new at some point, you're right. Have fun with the site, you'll receive a lot of help from some amazing reviewers. I only ...