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I haven't reviewed in ages! Let's read, read and read! So many questions floating in my head. I’m so confused, but your not (You're not) actually helping me are you? ...

Really? Lol thanks! I've been wondering whether people would ever touch my book if it reached the shelves. :D Happy that you liked it, so very happy.

Yay! Thanks Shub and Book!! :D I know, guys, I do pick the wrong words sometimes. When you read a weird misplaced word in there, know that's when someone talked ...

You're absolutely right. And you know what? Sometimes it's delicious to doubt ourselves... I mean delicious when we get over it, of course. Lol It's exactly why we do rough ...

‘There is a place I’ve heard off (of) in the city. Do you want to go there?’ she asked (comma) relieved. ‘Yeah, sure,’ I said wondering how big the mistake ...

Dear God, I'm going to faint! X.X You liked it too! How come you all like it? That's impossible! Thank you, thank you! I'm so happy that you guys just ...

Thanks a lot, Pink! You helped me out so so much and I'll rewrite the parts that needs to be changed. :D I'm so happy you liked it, especially that ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Dear loving God, you posted this comment while I was seriously going out of mind and having doubts in my writing style. I can't ...

This scene is very short, but it's very important in my novel because it's the reason of my protagonist's misery. Thank you, Shub ^^

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If you're reading a novel, how would you like this death scene to be put forward? Let's say the protagonist is standing in front of an old blood stain and ...

We started booking it across the parking lot. “WHAT WAS THAT??!?! WHY!?! JUST WHY?!? WERE YOU TRYING TO GET THIS OUTCOME?!?!” I shouted. “Save your breath. We’ve got to RUN!” ...

First, you used both past and present tense while telling the story. Try to decide which you want to tell the story with. The Foolish Heart Once again I have ...

O.o A lot of people reviewed. :( I'm too late I like this one better. I liked the previous version too, but I haven't known that it was rushed until ...

o.o Dear god! What will happen next? He should apologize now! He shouldn't make her feel like she's taken for granted. Girl, you're inspiring. Take my word for it! Chapter ...