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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Soft Spot for Me

    wow that is a really beautiful poem. you could use different words to make it sound more sophisticated. but otherwise, i think it awesome! You are going to be a ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: "Charm and wit..."

    That was really captivating. The main idea was a little unclear, but your descriptions and analogies were very, very real. You sound like a very experienced poet.

    Nov 6, 2011


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson