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All done! I was away for a while and couldn't get Internet. But I'm back!

I just finished those two. Who's next?

I will review all your poetry in honor of NaPo!!! Please do not post fanfiction, novels, or short stories. I love poetry! I read it, I write it, and I ...

Please review my New poem, The Ladybug (when you have time of course)! Thanks, Pink!

Symphony:

The Ladybug

Haha You are so funny! I will definitely post mine once I write it! Hmmm...

Hey! Please review my new poem, Symphony :)

Oh my god I love this poem! I'm serious. It left me breathless. I loved the ending about unkept promises. I can relate to that so much. I know how ...

I loved this poem! I can relate so much to it. I think a lot of people can. The only suggestions I can give are to add some sort of ...

They say that people change, Like seasons, like the tide. But there’s nothing that compares to you, Behind those careless eyes. Change is such a fickle thing, And you’re the ...

I love topic! All of us readers and writers can relate to it. The line "somewhere between my soul and my fingertips" was excellent and it made me think. Although ...

I love the concept and the topic! However, a few quick suggestions: The first stanza rhymed: touch and much. Then you continued the poem and it did not rhyme, which ...

I love the title! I love the structure! I think you're off to a great start. The part about the ivory throne was a little confusing. Also, during the first ...

editing it now!