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Re: The Elements, Chapter 1
I think U rushed it a bit, but I loved ur metaphors and i lkiked the mystique atmosphere. You're really good, i liked it! lol! This is just a small ...
Dec 16, 2007 -
Re: gambling
I think this was good, but i wish it was longer, it looked like it was leading on somewhere/ Really liked it though! lol
Dec 16, 2007