Georgiexx

Hey, The only bad thing i actually noticed is that your story seems a bit rushed. take your time to explain the little things. eg, when they killed the robot ...

Thanks Arris. I re-looked over it and you were right. I suck at grammar. Hope i fixed it up where it needed it. Love Georgie. XX

Ms. Evenight ushered me up the hallway, passing students that all blended together. Quickly she shoved me into a small class room that was full of faces that showed a ...

Smashles ;) First up, i love it! It had all the girly teenage emotions crammed into your main character, the sorrow and the pain of heart break. Also the unusual ...

I'm just going to get straight to it, the title needs a space. Im not great on grammar myself, but the title was bugging me. Anyway your possibly sick of ...

Okay, first up... i loved it. Others have said it was a cliff hanger and i agree, "You're not the onlt one thats nervous."- what a great ending, it leaves ...

A piercing scream echoed around me and out of my lungs as I fell, trembling onto the ground; I could feel my muscles tearing, my joints snapping and my skin ...