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Name: Mahrissa Matherson Age: 17 Crime: Murder Shoplifting/burglary Public intoxication Appearance: Mahrissa is rougly 5'10" and model thin. Her long legs are usually covered with designer jeans and t

Thanks for the help. I have edited it and just attached it, it was easier. If you find anything else wrong with it, please let me know. Hope you like ...

hey, I agree with Wolfdaemon. This story does have a lot of potential but it needs a lot of work done on the grammar and the spelling side of things, ...

Hey, i have to say that even though it was very short i actually liked it. it was different to what people normally write on here and it had its ...

Hey ultraviolet! I love this story, it is so amazingly original. Your MC seems like a awesome typical teenager, so well done there. I like that i havn't heard of ...

Firstly, i just wanted to tell you all that the title is supposed to be spelt that way. Also, i am hoping you wont get bored of my story or ...

Hey, First off i just wanted to tell you how much i loved your characters. I know others have said that Oliver was a bit up front, but i think ...

MADDY!!!! loved the story, it was definetly interesting. It was definetly individual and well thought of. it kept my attention and seemed to be fine with the spelling side of ...

I Agreed with FRAYEDjade. i loved the sespence that you created between the characters and how you left the ending open for more thought. But i also totally agree that ...

I knew the pain was too much; the internal pain that tore at my heart, the feeling of breaking, shattering, clawing at my insides. I knew I could never let ...

I agree with Persephoneia. It is very well writen like i said before, but it need a bit of change. Alex jumped up, feeling pain in her ankle. It was ...

Hey, Very well written. Loved that the song fits in nicely with the story. Okay so i dont have much that i found wrong with it. "Don't do this. You ...

Hey, im writing a novel with a similar twist. Try looking up brain waves or telepathy. This site may help a bit, Also you could include a ganzfeld cocoon, which ...

Okay, I edited it. I hope I fixed the grammar and spelling errors, and that everyone is no longer 'confuzzled'. I also spaced it so it's no longer all bunched ...

Apparently newb's write on the welcome mat, so i thought i would too. Ive been on the site for roughly 2, maybe 3 days. Loving the chat room, and the ...