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Re: Tormented Chapters 3-5
Thank you so so much, Truth. I knew it would be a lot of work going through it all and im glad that you liked it. Ill try to fix ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies- Chapter Three
heya. I'm here as requested :D Thanks for the review on the start of my story and im glad you liked it ;) Anyways, to the point. I truely did ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Tormented Chapters 3-5
Heya, Im guessing if you are reading this, you must have actually liked the first 2 chapters... so THANKS :D anyways... a friend wanted me to post these, and im ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: The Art of Love
Heya :D I just wanted to say "wow". This is deep and the reader can capture the emotions that flow through your story. You are an execptional writer and i ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Before They Say Goodnight
OMG!! Ashy-babe this is absolutely awesomely fantastic! Its really powerful and its deeeppp :) You should totally get this recorded or something, you've got the voice for it! I love ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Ingeniosus. Chapter four.
“The History of Ingeniosus” Chapter 4 We stepped out of the Professors room slowly, and as soon as the strange door shut, Jai pulled me quickly around a corner and ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Ingeniosus. Chapter three.
“The School for the Gifted” Chapter 3 We turned down a few streets, passing an elaborate cathedral decorated with distinctive stones and stained glass windows; it was remarkable. The path ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Ingeniosus. Chapter two.
“Jai Payne” Chapter 2 “Savanna. Maree. Ryder.” my Mother, Elena, practically yelled at me; using my full name in emphasis of her bad mood. Sometimes I think we were only ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Ingeniosus. Chapter one.
And spoil the story? Haha. Nah... But it will all be revealed soon. They are what you could call *special*. :P Jai and Savanna are not one of the paranormals ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Ingeniosus. Chapter one.
I hope you like it. Please comment. :wink: Ingeniosus. (Re-written) “Hades” Chapter 1 Everything is different now. I can’t be who I used to be, my life is like empting ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: Faith (Chapter 1, Part 1)
Heya Maddy. I really like this story, i think it is cute. At first i thought the old man was going to be a creep, and was meantally shouting "Run ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: A Vampires Kiss
Nawww... :D i really liked your peice, it kept my attention. Only critisism i had was the punctuation but KanenRenoir picked up on that for me. Also try expanding on ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Worship
Heya ;) Just thought i would say that you are a great writer. You did well with describing the scene and what was happening. For some people, writing or reviewing ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Darkmoor Juvenile Prison
Mahrissa M. I had been quite these past few days; keeping out of trouble. Since I threw the punches at Carrie and got myself electrified by the stupid security bracelet, ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Darkmoor Juvenile Prison
we were playing english version football not american football I think Classy. Whats the difference? Please.
Oct 14, 2010
