GeekyKid

Thank you keekers :)....will extend it though....

Enjoyed it.....would love to read the longer version though.....

Enjoyed reading this piece..fantastic work..more suspense would have made it better..and a few errors..but good job :)

Thank you Dover...really appreciated..and yes I did realize the spelling after posting the story..guess I was typing fast and didn't realize the spelling errors...but thanks again...appreciated :)

Thank you very much...and No it didn't actually happen..just something that came to my head..but thanks again :)

Thanks...for the encouragement..much better...didn't even think of that..thanks though :)

Thanks for the was basically supposed to be a mystery..where the readers are supposed to figure out what she went through..But thanks anyways :)