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thanks for your comments btw why does everyone think my character is called Carrie? I've read through the story and I don't see why everyone thinks that

Um OK. seeing as you comment on my stories i thought i would comment on yours! this could be a good piece of writing, but you use certain words too ...

well, it was ok but i don't really understand it i mean, why is she so scared? and the story didn't really go anywhere, it was described a night out

oh my god, i already hate Locke! hes so mean! Why is he mean? I bet that the characters end up going out please write more, and PM me when ...

OK No offence but this was boring. Nothing exciting happened. It was just a really simple conversation between a couple of friends and I don't even get why this girl ...

I sat on the beach, hugging my knees. I didn't speak to anybody. All I could do was think about him . I had stared at the body for a ...

i think you need to back up your story with something more reliable. Blood tablets? sorry but that doesn't seem very interesting! The whole point of being a vampire is ...

this could be a good story but to me it seems that everything is happening too fast i mean, the readers only just found out that there's this amazing girl ...

well this one was good like the others! write more and let me know when you do please! the only thing I didn't understand was the bit about his father. ...

I went back up to the cliff. Now that I knew that Brian was up to something, I wanted to find out what. Most of the time, I was terrified ...

i love the fact that arnold is going mad! the alarm clock was a good touch- talking to the furniture! i think you could have added more detail about the ...

thats creepy! how did the attacker get inside the house? how did he whisper to arnold without being seen? I'm hoping that everything will be explained soon! this is really ...

this was good-there was a lot of action! i liked the way you described the bomb exploding but I was a bit confused by the bomb. I thought Arnold had ...

well I'm glad that you continued it but this one was a bit boring not much really happened apart from that fatc that someone else might die in 11 days ...

this is good! its interesting and mysterious who is the killer? why is he killing people? are the victims connected in any way? why is it eleven days? why not ...