Gazza_14

Hey, this is my first story on here so don't be too harsh. Obviously I want creative criticism but I hope at least one person likes it. I am mainly ...

Did you miss us?

Have you just arrived?

Will you accept my apology?

Are you sure that it is?

Should I have been listening?

Good story. I definitely want to see more but your opening let you down. Despite instantly explaining the situation it was too bland and the scene in the jury was ...

What on earth are you all talking about?

My school is so sport-obsessed that we don't have one. Believe me, most of the money in our school goes towards financing sport. Subjects like english, welsh and art go ...

Good story, the beginning could to with some tweaks but it was very good and you set the scene perfectly. I felt very drawn to it. The style used was ...

LOL, thank you. :D

He grins. This girl is different-but she wants to know more. The alarm bells ring in his head- his personal life is a safe, locked up in his mind. Best ...

Shameless bump. Don't judge me!! :(

"Didn't I already say it?" He says, finally lifting his eyes anf forcing a smile. "It's Damien, Damien Crow," A sudden surge of confidence bubbles in his veins. He feels ...

Damien grins shyly at the girl who stands in front of him. A dog runs around her ankles playfully. "Hi, I'm Damien,"He mumbles and instantly goes a shade of crimson. ...