Gazza_14

Is it necessary we complicate things?

Why do you all confuse me?

Thanks for all comments so far. I think the general feeling is that it's a good idea that has lots of potenial, but the writing is flawed in many places. ...

Oh look, I'm tired. Is this sarcasm? 'Cos I'm seriously too tired to tell. I know it's long, but I think people can manage it.

Thank you Reicheru. I have seen your crit work before and it is honest and well written, so I shall send you PM soon

Is it important that I know?

Will someone please crit this?

Well, who is asking?

woooooooooo! Rule Britania, Britania rules the waves! :lol:

Damien relaxes on the rock, his legs swinging to the music in his head. He glances at Emma, who seems very intrerested in a conversation between to people near them. ...

Is there? *slaps head* Oy...

I just thought it would really help the brilliant *bows to NATE* people who run this site to know what we would like to see added on, or what we ...

Damien stares anxiously at the young man on his phone, shouting ferociously, flicking from Hebrew to English with ease. They all seem so depressed, he feels glum just being around ...

But are we as crazy as the french?

"Not really," He admits miserably "There's not much to do, is there?" He stares at the shadows around him. Looking as if life itself had pushed them away. The harsh ...