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Thanks SNoik. I'll work on, well, everything.

I thought it was clever, rather than corny, but maybe that's me being a simpleton. Simple, well formatted, easily flowing dialog. I just liked the shallowness of it all, and ...

Very helpful and very funny, even if you did make me realise i always to the vague critiques. You also forget the other way to react to a bad crit ...

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Sorry this is a pretty pathetic crit, but i just wanted to say that's a nice story, and it runs quite smoothly, but the start is a bit too clunky ...

Thanks for crit, everyone. There's more to come, and i'll also iron out all the errors in the first part. Thanks :)

Thanks for the crit. I'll be sure to correct the italics thing. I'vr never read or seen [i]One flew over.[/i].. so its co-incidenc-honest!

Hello. Have to write short story, anything as long as it concerns mental illnes for a school competition. So mines's a sort of tale of muder and psychology. Just like ...

What's with all the hinting?

Only on Tuesdays. Should i move to to the moon?

When did Reicheru return?

Who knows? Do youlike to dance the jitterbug?

That was good, definetely interesting and kept my interest, which is a bonus in itself. Although, i do think the characters were introduced far too fast. One minute they're entering ...

Only when teddy munchkin isn't on hand. What is the opposite of that light colour, you know, like a cream colour?

YWS is hungry for lots of new stuff. The moderators keep the members in funky mood and enjoy global diversity throughout the forum when dinosaurs unleash absolutly unholy noises that ...