Gazza_14

Hello :D This is a pretty new idea, and me just having fun writing. Just wanted to get some feedback. Once upon a time there was a country. A magical ...

I haven't been on this forum for so long, just thought I'd say hey again. Though probably not many would remember me. So... Hello! :D

She only had herself to sulk with. Screaming was just shouting at the walls, who didn't really care that a perfectly good story had been ruined. Su left the pastel-coloured ...

Hey, just came up with the idea for this story recently, so its a very early stage. I know it's very Twilight Zone-y but i love the TZ so it ...

It does say in the first part that Lilac is sitting on 'Global Inc.' and that she can feel the world puslating 'below her'. Do you think that's not enough ...

'It all sounds very dramatic,' Rover said. 'It was meant to be like the old-earth trains,' Lilac continued 'Except instead of riding on tracks it was to ride over the ...

A lifeless body slumped against the floor. 'Get rid of her,' It said. A circle of robots, glimmering under the dim light of the office, clutched the limp, heavy body ...

Thanks for all yout crit so far. Mr. Toad is a rat humanoid, meaning that he is has the basic shape of human, but the appearance of a rat. The ...

^ is obsessed with pimps < Is doing coursework v Enjoys to speak like yoda

^ has a cool avatar < has a free lesson and is pleased v Falls over a lot

^ has a name which reminds me of Alice in Wonderland

**** Her boots thudded against the plush carpet as she trooped the other side of the hallway. She was shaking, unfamiliar jolts of excitement shooting across her stomach. She could ...

^ is absolutely correct :D < Can't get msn to work v Is humming a song to themselves

'That's a joke isn't it? You're joking?' Lilac's voice jumped between octaves, her eyes swimming with fear 'Tell me...tell me that that was some rubbish little joke you've come up ...

********** 'Oh baby, I'm home.' Out of the stainless steel skyline that cut across the horizon of Violet Lights, one building stuck out unlike any other. The Sewer System Nightclub. ...