Gamergirl

Firstly I love they way you opend with a question, really nice way to grab the reader. Everyone has a crush right? However I think there should of been a ...

An other greatly done chapter. Your wording is just as great here and I feel extremely sorry for poor Maria and everything she has been through. You make the readers ...

I feel so much sympathy for Maria. The way you have explained the sorrow she feels and the way she tries so hard to convince herself that it isn't true. ...

Um, I'm a newbie and I'm starting to think I've gotten in way over my head with this site. I'm really confused about everything here. Can I get some help?

I am very confused as to what you are going on about. What really are you talking about ? :)

Game On Level 1 : Press Start Jay did spend the night with us. We stay up way too late playing video games. We eventually decided to get some sleep ...

Very nice and I have to agree with the other reviewer, commas would of been better. This seemed somewhat rushed and a little over thought out. But it was nice ...

Never read the book myself but I did watch the movie *shot* (I didn't even know it was based off a book *shot again*). However seeing your review has made ...

I agree, this would have been great if it was expanded into a story. A lot of questions here. Like whom is speaking? Why is she/he so close to Death? ...

For me this was a little confusing at first. However I did get it (eventually). Really enjoyed it and they way you've formatted it. Lovey piece. :)

Game On Level 0 : A Real Love For Gaming I couldn't help but cry. After everything me and him had been through, it would be me that was either ...