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Re: Abbie and Lexi's Guide To Saving The World
Abbie And Lexi's Guide To Saving The World Chapter 1 : Shopping In The Winter I always found Christmas break, well, boring. Maybe it's because I hate the snow, the ...
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Re: Dolly Doll's
Dolly Doll's Chapter 0.1: Abbie I always found Christmas break, well, boring. Maybe it's because I hate the snow, the cold, all the lights and why the hell is everyone ...
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Re: United we Stand
Chapter Eleven: The Unknown Terror Rain started to fall from the sky, mixed with the bitter cold of the air made it worse. My coat was soon soaked and started ...
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Re: Princess Aaron
Hello I shall be review this :) I'll just jump right in. Prologue The heir was expected to be a strong son, he would be 'brave and bold' as the ...
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Re: Gravestone pt.1
Hello! I'll be reviewing your work this fine day :) I'll just say what I think as I read this. One thing that doesn’t scare me are graveyards at night. ...
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Re: Game On (Level 3)
Game On Level 3 : Wake up I stared at this dark haired boy, my mouth agape. I only knew him for about ten minutes and now he is telling ...
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Re: Of Toads, Peaches and Teenage Angst: Chapter 1
Hello, I'm just going to review this quickly from what I've read so far. As many people have said you over explained things. It took a while to get to ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Of Toads, Peaches and Teenage Angst: Chapter 1
Hello, I'm just going to review this quickly from what I've read so far. As many people have said you over explained things. It took a while to get to ...
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Re: Dragons of Elements
Dragons of Elements Chapter 1 Bloody Night It was a night of blood. Fire swallowed the small village hole. A madman's laugh could be heard. A desperate father takes his ...
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Re: Lovers or Haters ?
Hello I'll be review this so far. Today's The First Day Of School . I Groaned and Go Out Of Bed . I Peeled My Clothes Off and Put On ...
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Re: Call me Alice: Part Two
I am going to just jump right in and get straight to the point :D Yay! I'm glad to see your wrote this chapter up so fast. Ashton: Micah: The ...
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Re: A Girl's Life
I'm going to be honest and say that this didn't make a lot of sense to myself. However I may just be stupid. :D This piece is well written, however ...
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Re: Perilous lies
Hello and I'll be review your story today :) I'm just gonna jump right in. Drew was a hottie a year older than me. I think it would be best ...
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Re: Game On (Level 2)
Game On Level 2 : Bal I would just like to exaggerate the fact that this ship is fucking massive! I mean every time I think our tour ended Roi ...
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Re: Dreams Tell Lies Cover
This is a lovey taken photo. The position of the girl is selected beautifully. The ripples in the water are a great effect, along with the little shines. However I ...
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