Galerius

Hi silented1, Others may have mentioned this, or not, but the eye with which the reader views the settings and and story changes abruptly, without any fluidity. You talk about ...

Hi Lydia1995, None of this makes any sense, and the reader is left wondering whether you actually used your mind to write this poem or whether you wrote down vague ...

Hi Hannah, I really hope that picture you put before the poetry is for a contest or something, because I'm pretty horrified by this new trend I've seen of people ...

Hi Kamas, Forgive me if you detect that this review is sub-par in any way, for I am writing this while being forced to listen to the cacophony of the ...

Hi yuprincess, This falls apart at the very beginning. I'm not sure what you did to this for three days, but apparently many more days of improvement will be needed ...

Hi TenYo, This is about the most uninterestingly optimistic thing I've ever had to read. Yes, happy poems can be as powerful and deep as any others, but frolicking through ...

Hi Kevothewriter, Have you ever heard of Chinese water torture? As I've heard it, the victim is placed in a position where droplets of water drip onto his forehead, one ...

Hi ScarlettFire, This is a bunch of fluff stuffed with cotton so it looks like your child is well-fed even though it's been starving and crying for some actual food ...

Hi Thegirlwholived, This piece of jumbled linear cliche and half-submerged nostalgic emotion fails on every level. There is literally nothing in here to like or want to keep, both for ...

Hi Evi, I should say in the beginning that even though this is obviously a personal poem, I will not soften my review. Just wanted to throw that out there ...

Hi BenFranks, This piece was repetitive and generally well below mediocre. The imagery throughout is on par, although nothing stands out as really catching the reader's eye; unfortunately, it doesn't ...

Hi silented1, One thing that I have liked about your poems on your blog is the raw, kind of bleeding intensity that they portray - unbridled emotion, a fast pace. ...

Hi ofir, The fact that this haphazardly strewn caricature made it onto featured pages is another sign of how most cannot be trusted to identify good literature. This is not. ...

Hi HelpfulMcHelpfulpants, ... and this is the reason why deliberately attempting to rhyme every last word of every line doesn't work when it takes precedence over the poem itself. This ...

Hi MissSaraElizabeth, If we take out the line breaks, we're left with this: I am playing a game that you made for me. It is long and strenuous,but there is ...