Galerius

Hi spiderman, I don't know the nature of the magazine, but I do believe that this piece will be put into the recycle bin by the editor. There is a ...

Hi Hibiscus, When the only good thought of a reader of a particular poem is "This will soon be over", you know you have a problem. And your issue is ...

Boo, Galerius. Can't bring yourself to rip me apart as well? Heh, I'm not one to refuse a challenge, so here we go: I am not inclined to think that ...

Hi Kamas, This is the piece that you're submitting for the contest, right? We may be competitors, but I feel that you might still benefit from some things I'd like ...

Hi kingolions, It is good to see someone acknowledging that their piece is bad. The fact that you wrote this after hearing a song itself rings warning bells; songs cannot ...

Each float, each vestige in the parade of patriotism, is powered by a motive of non-altruism. Too chunky. "Powered by a motive of non-altruism", really? You're not writing a dissertation ...

Hi Jane Thermopolis, Stop repeating yourself. Yes, it's in a town, we get it. This constant churning of the same phrase over and over again makes it seem as though ...

Haha. The best poets I've read are all shadows - orphans, vandals, you name it - whose names nobody will ever know.

We must base laws on reason and evidence over religious speculation. Many rational arguments have been made in favor of anti-abortion laws; it would behoove you to abstain from pinning ...

Hi Navita, The reason we chose you to rise to the helm of that 2000-word contest was because of writing like this. It's good stuff, refreshingly tonic in its simplicity, ...

Hi Helpful McHelpfulpants, This is the most beautiful thing I have ever seen, besides myself. Hope that helped, Galerius

I shall be following this most eagerly.

Hi Kylan, Gonna take the first poem right now and the others when I have more time, hopefully tonight. If it had been anybody else but you, I would not ...

Hi Samsal, This might have been a cute piece had there not been imagery speedbumps hastily plunged in to arbitrary spaces, jolting the reader out of immersion into the poem. ...

Hi Kylan, Hey, the first line actually has five syllables this time around. Nice. Hope that helped, Galerius