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Re: Nonsense poem!
this, my friends, is plagiarism. For further reading, please see:
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: A Degraded Angel
While moonbeams whispered and tall trees shouted, how are trees supposed to shout? if anything, they should whisper. i know that you think that connecting inanimate objects with human qualities ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: To an Unloved Rose.
If you remain a tiny rose Alone behind the log— A Tree, immense, denies the rain— You’re motionless in fog— dont capitalize "tree" and dont contract "you are" into "you're"; ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: To an Unloved Rose.
If you remain a tiny rose Alone behind the log— A Tree, immense, denies the rain— You’re motionless in fog—[/quote[ dont capitalize "tree" and dont contract "you are" into "you're"; ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: What is real?
in that case, you made the meaning cloudy by switching the phrases "dream" and "reality". when you said that your fictional lover ceases to exist in your dreams, i took ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: What is real?
in that case, you made the meaning cloudy by switching the phrases "dream" and "reality". when you said that your fictional lover ceases to exist in your dreams, i took ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Fiction
something i wrote at a writers workshop... please try not to be harsh, it was rushed i'll try although after reading your poem through one time, it wont be easy. ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: I Love Emo!
At least someone is smart! because clearly intelligence has to do with personal preference and opinion. I am emo and Im not "depressed all the time" I have my moments ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Words
very well. however, i still think this should be under Other Writing, as it does not have whats makes a poem in the first place...i could write a 2500-word story ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Is It Wrong?
most of my poems which have won awards, i made in a short time of some random inspiration. no kidding. :shock:
Sep 26, 2008 - Re: Gateway to That Place Sep 26, 2008
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Re: A Most Dismal Prospect
The sky today was properly grey and somber, not that it was at all unusual. It gave the entire churchyard a wilted look, as the dusty old preacher read from ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: What Kind Of Fool Am I?
My darling, you know I love you, half blessed & cursed the day I found you, lost in the Wonderland around you, what kind of fool am I? this really ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: The Naughty Boy
yeah, this is old...lol, i would have ripped this apart if missy hadn't reminded us that it was a year old. thanks, and i'll check out some of your newer ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: What is real?
Will you forever be a figment of my imagination? Will you forever be a never-ending dream? bad bad bad way to start off a poem. meaningles repetition, vapid ideas, and ...
Sep 26, 2008
