Galerius

here, let me shorten this poem for you: "i love you and you love me! whee!" ...i'm sorry, i cant even critique this properly because frankly i'm not sure how ...

spike, since your just 13 i'm going to assume that you are still tinkering with your poetry much more than many of us here. so i'll go easy. Seven months ...

Please review this poem: Thanks!

Please review this poem: Thanks!

We want Xbox360, Ps3 and Wii! Fast games Not slow old black and white films. We want sports cars, motorbikes and quad bikes! Fast wheels Not cranky old Rovers. We ...

i have to admit it...this was pretty good compared to your other pieces. full review coming soon when i have some more time.

clearly you havent picked up anything the reviews of your previous poem... Sat beneath a timid tree, Her branches tremble so. The wind bids to sooth me, with gentle winds ...

ah, now i am beginning to believe that this site really does house literature after all. onto the matter... Beat is not in tea shades Not in peasant wanderings Or ...

i will critique this soon; check this spot in a few hours.

This is a sequel of sorts to my much-loved Winter Road poem. I don't think it's as good as Winter Road but it's pretty good, I think. uh, your winter ...

Oh my God "save it and shock me" ?!?! Galerius you are so hard to please! nope, just a connoisseur.

Little girl you've wandered so far... Lost the light of your guiding star, Found the light of another star-- A morning star-- nope, doesnt fit at all with the title ...

The stars listen as I call your name. You never answer. this doesn't even make sense. what do the stars have to do with anything? are they a metaphor for ...

i'm not even going to bother giving this a line-by-line critique because of how devoid of imagery, metaphor, symbolism...well, its devoid of pretty much everything but words. so a girl ...