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Re: Fallen
I have to say, this is much better. And I mean much better. Little girl, you've wandered so far... Lost the light of your guiding star, Blinded by darkness, tearing ...
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Re: One to believe in
There is always one to believe in: God, Gods, spirits, people... we always need somebody or some thing to believe in to. Why did you include "people" in there? It ...
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Re: Do you approve on interracial dating?
Let me just make a blanket statement : anyone who opposes a person's right to interracial dating is a racist. [after all, racism = discrimination or prejudice based on race.] ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Rainbow underground: the stone city
the year is 2075, i am a part of the protect, and lead program formed by the underground. and these are dark times. this is my story. Ack. No no ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]
[s]I hope you're still doing this...if not, then sorry for bumping this topic up. Name: Visionary Genre: Romantic Fiction Summary: A boy finds the meaning of true love. Wordcount: 498 ...
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Re: Visionary
removed
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Abortion
Snoink--but you don't know that until the baby is delivered or miscarried, in many instances. Is that "murder", then, too, if it's the mother's body? How is the natural death ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Him :)
What is this? I'm sorry, but I refuse to critique this in a more in-depth analysis because at first glance, it is full of cliches, bland language, metaphor-dry lines, poor ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Why are we celebrating different grades/year of graduations?
Silly silly underclassmen. Why must they steal the Seniors' flame?
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Advice for burgeoning poets
You are not oversimplifying. Too often, poetry is seen as just something written for the poet, and thus it is assumed that the piece can be as strange, simplistic, or ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Your pain
I step aside, I watch you cry. My soul is torn apart. I want to stop the pain you feel. I want to soothe your aching heart. You push me ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Da qualche parte nel cuore di Roma
Da qualche parte nel cuore di Roma By Angel of Death They've all crowded around in one spot Their cameras are flashing and their artificial lights are blocking my eyes ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: My Family
I watched him as his world of ‘booze’ drowned him away, I watched the only way he ‘helped’ his pain. I don't like that you've put the words "booze" and ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: Abortion
The fetus cannot survive out of its mother's womb. It is not alive, like a virus is not alive; it has to cling to its host in order to live, ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: What will Bush do.
Bush will probably retire and occasionally come out in public to do speeches and panels for the Republicans. Otherwise, his role in US politics and society is pretty much over.
Nov 4, 2008
