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Re: alive but dying (revised)
1) The rhyme scheme is messed up. Generally I don't recommend a solid rhyme at all, but if you really want to, then please make it consistent. "Blind" does not ...
Nov 13, 2008 -
Re: mistakes
some mistakes you make you never can take back what you did you can never rewind time you have to do what's right and make thing's right again.Running away from ...
Nov 13, 2008 - Re: The Forgotten Begotten (Your Take on the Human Paradox) Nov 12, 2008
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Re: I'll be gone, missing you
She said "Life is unfair" "Life isn't unfair, we're just fools That don't enjoy it properly" I replied The last line is too blunt. I don't mean to say that ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Lying in a Hammock at William Duffy's Farm...
To my left waits eternity.
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Ask a stupid question...
我不认为你能翻译此 What is?
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
A ghost conductor playing sorrowfully through the ages, but with a flash in his eyes every now and then that alerts one to his ever-steady tempo and determination to self-preserve. ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: I'll be gone, missing you
Life is unfair Bad way to start a poem. It doesn't matter if you speak in English or Portuguese - the fact of the matter is that complaining outright does ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Danse Macabre
I wandered through the ballroom Shadows playing on the silver walls And candlelight flickering like the souls Of young lovers gone before their time There's something about this line that ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Be Positive
Positive is overrated.
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Battle for the White House
Also, Obama's not for gay marriage. :/ Neither of the candidates were. Obama is not for gay marriage when he speaks to the public. That does not mean he is ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Battle for the White House
Listen to my opinion that I told every single one of my friends today. The United States has been and is supposed to be the land of the FREE! Obama ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Abortion
We come back to the same issue, rape victims would not have the right to abortion if abortion was considered murder, it just doesn't add up. And consenting adults using ...
Nov 7, 2008 -
Re: Poetry Fight
This wouldn't happen to be about me, would it? :P
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: An Autumn Romance
For starters, we need to know who you're talking about and why we should care. Is he handsome? Is he your morning star in life, having bewitched you from the ...
Nov 6, 2008
