Galerius

Oh, you.

Hi jasminebells, Let's be honest; this barely deserves half a "like", and that's a generous estimate. Your entire poem can be summed up in three lines: A man was to ...

Hi PoeticGlow, I've come to two conclusions. The first is that you may have confused the poetry section with the nonfiction prose forums. The second is that you actually think ...

Hi Demoness, Well, the good news is that this poem has so many problems that the reader's total distaste leads him to overlook many of them in favor of identifying ...

Religions can be entirely separate entities, independent of philosophy and axioms of reasoning save for a common underlying thread - one that is often superficial or semantic in nature, such ...

Welcome to YWS, Kamas. Hyper as you may be, poor grammar will get you nowhere. Clean up your act, nub.

Hi Persephoneia, Nice try being cutsey, but all it serves to do is warm up this poem to the point that it melts. Ever taken liquified sugar and just drank ...

MeanMrMustard, Not gonna get involved in the fray here, but this Here, here Nate. That's a fine stance, that anyone can take on any matter. I can say I find ...

Hi silentriot, So I can feel feelings, huh? Guess that about sums up the intellectual prowess of this piece. You've clearly attempted to grasp everything ad nothing here, stuffing this ...

Hi BenFranks, Alright, here's a rundown of what made me really cringe throughout this piece. Line format. Yes, it may seem like a minor issue. However, when this demon lurks ...

TmB317, Yeah, why not just tack on "The sky's the limit!" onto the end of this poem. Maybe even "Follow your dreams!", that's a good one. This entire piece wept ...

Hi ehte92, This thing is dead. Here's your first problem: From the get-go, the reader immediately understands that "it" is supposed to be a metaphor for some hazy abstract half ...

Gallyallyarous: I don't see how those two things don't make sense? Murderers do cast away their humanity in my eyes. So does the death penalty. To kill another human being ...

So you believe that murderers have cast away their humanity but you despise the death penalty because it's... inhuman. I don't get it. Furthermore, the point never was - and ...