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Galerius

  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: To Avenge My Family

    I stood across from the man in the middle of the dusty street. Women were hurriedly running in doors pulling children along with them. A small smile came to my ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Jiggity's Jiggling Jays!

    I need some jiggle in my life. Watch this space; I'll get back to you as soon as I post a worthy piece, which should be soon...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love's Punishment

    They beat you, they bruised you; they tortured your soul. Vague and bland. I see nothing in here that sparks the imagination, that forces my mind to plummet into their ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Jan 2, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs

    500 points to the next person to post something cool. Real cool.

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: On A Painted Canvas

    This poem was expensive - that is, it took time to read without offering little to nothing to compensate in the way of ideas or even simple imagery. First, you ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Never Alone in Heaven

    There are two problems hampering this poem that make it unacceptable for anyone wishing for a good read. The first is a technical one: the rhyming, which follows such a ...

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Poetry Discussion Re: The Best Way to Improve Your Poetry

    I like the purple elephant.

    Dec 31, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: The First Time I Lost You

    Befor last night, you were my world. But now it seems like I'm not your girl. Generally, the first word of a poem should be spelled correctly - it sets ...

    Dec 30, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Swallow Me Forever

    Her eyes are like the ocean That she stares into endlessly Trying to hide the tears that Just won’t go away The last two lines of this stanza kill any ...

    Dec 30, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!

    A "man" who jiggles and oozes? Hardly macho type. Make way for the real men around here, junior.

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!

    EDIT: Jiggity beat me to the punch. I'll just sulk away now.

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Coexist

    Fine: Ho ho ho, Merry Christmas, etc. :smt114 I have points to argue against that last post, but I'll save them until after New Years...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Streetlamp Heroes

    These knights wore blue jeans, and leather jackets, Are these supposed to be Greasers? In any case, the beginning is overly simplistic for what I'm beginning to expect is a ...

    Dec 26, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs

    300 points for the best brief explanation of who you think is the sexiest person on YWS.. And contestants can't choose Administrator or Moderators. Also, Jiggity is barred from this ...

    Dec 26, 2008


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