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Re: To Avenge My Family
I stood across from the man in the middle of the dusty street. Women were hurriedly running in doors pulling children along with them. A small smile came to my ...
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Re: Jiggity's Jiggling Jays!
I need some jiggle in my life. Watch this space; I'll get back to you as soon as I post a worthy piece, which should be soon...
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Re: Love's Punishment
They beat you, they bruised you; they tortured your soul. Vague and bland. I see nothing in here that sparks the imagination, that forces my mind to plummet into their ...
Jan 3, 2009 - Re: Post Your Pic Here [6] Jan 2, 2009
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Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs
500 points to the next person to post something cool. Real cool.
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: On A Painted Canvas
This poem was expensive - that is, it took time to read without offering little to nothing to compensate in the way of ideas or even simple imagery. First, you ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Never Alone in Heaven
There are two problems hampering this poem that make it unacceptable for anyone wishing for a good read. The first is a technical one: the rhyming, which follows such a ...
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: The Best Way to Improve Your Poetry
I like the purple elephant.
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: The First Time I Lost You
Befor last night, you were my world. But now it seems like I'm not your girl. Generally, the first word of a poem should be spelled correctly - it sets ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Swallow Me Forever
Her eyes are like the ocean That she stares into endlessly Trying to hide the tears that Just won’t go away The last two lines of this stanza kill any ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!
A "man" who jiggles and oozes? Hardly macho type. Make way for the real men around here, junior.
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: There are no men on Young Writers Society!
EDIT: Jiggity beat me to the punch. I'll just sulk away now.
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Coexist
Fine: Ho ho ho, Merry Christmas, etc. :smt114 I have points to argue against that last post, but I'll save them until after New Years...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Streetlamp Heroes
These knights wore blue jeans, and leather jackets, Are these supposed to be Greasers? In any case, the beginning is overly simplistic for what I'm beginning to expect is a ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: 1500 Points Up for Grabs
300 points for the best brief explanation of who you think is the sexiest person on YWS.. And contestants can't choose Administrator or Moderators. Also, Jiggity is barred from this ...
Dec 26, 2008
