Galerius

You got 'em, I need 'em. Thanks.

Well, on most writing sites, people know how to critique, so its not really a fair comparison.

This baby I bestow thee, She will be your saving grace. From all the deity she is yours, Such a special gift is a rarity. The flow is just floating ...

The skies darken, As the sun dies. Up in the heavens, The angels cry. Since this is a beginning, I will give the boring imagery and uninterested tone of the ...

How am I suppose to live in a house so empty? A house with nothing in it but furniture and walls in it?A house with no love, and no family. ...

The gaunt and effete trees have left the earth repugnant that not a man with open eyes this carcass earth could please. That first two lines are painfully ugly. Read ...

This is basically glorified fanfiction, why are the moderators paying so much serious attention to it? Not really. Some members have defended serious illegal activities and they have been banned ...

This poem isn't going to win any contest. Let's begin: The content is basically a laundry list of events and incidents, and then a shallow remark on the general concept ...

but please, no advice on how to improve it or anything to change...I'm sure you understand. What does this even mean? Why are you even here?

Humiliation exceeds the involuntary rush of blood to my cheeks. Truth seems to be something that exudes. Even before the poem has really started thematically, your first two lines have ...

If you find yourself complacent in your sloth state and demonstrate an unwillingess to change while ferreting out opportunities to remain at your lowest electron excitement level indefinitely, this is

[quote=LoveableLittleSock] I trip over sidewalks, I trip over plants I trip over pebbles and the hem of my pants All this as you run you’re able to see But nevertheless, ...

Do you hang on to yesterday's newspaper, believing it to be the rarest of all treasures? I cringed at the line breaks, all of which seem random at best. What ...

My mind, Pinned down, Unable to think, unable to right, You may have meant "write" instead of "right". I will assume, though, that you meant what you put there; I'm ...