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Re: <Deleted by Author>
This isn't much of a poem. First of all, not knowing how to spell "dying" doesn't come off as very impressive, so have your title fixed as soon as you ...
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Re: YWS New Automatic Feature
Roe v Wade , d00d.
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Re: I am the wild horse
I'm still working on making my poems more consistent, but I tried to make it as formal as I could without completely changing my original draft. Formal? As in...? It ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: deleted
I was standing amongst a large crowd when the rain began to fall While others ran indoors I remained outside The presence of the rain was soothing for me The ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Points Up for Grabs
800 points up for grabs. The only stipulation is that you have to be a really awesome person.
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: Don't think i'm going to finish
Guess you won't finish. But since this has no reviews, allow me. The gentle lapping of the waves at me feet relaxed my body. Pictures of what had happened kept ...
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: Tell Him
He's all alone, just sitting there On his shoulders is the whole world's hate He bears the wind with a frontwards stare He's still alive but it's too late "Frontwards ...
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: Light
The sunshine breaking free Of cloud cover And the moon gleaming On frosty ground. Might as well say this now: capitalizing the first letter of every line is not necessary ...
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: 3am in the City
Standing on the center line, incandescent lights casting orange on the wet pavement… There are good ways of trailing off a phrase slowly and there are bad ways. You just ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: I'm Hungry...
Thread, I command thee: Arise upon this scarred earth once more, claw out of the sunken dirt to embrace the waning light! Thanks.
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Points Up for Grabs
300 points up for grabs. Take 'em, or I'll eat 'em.
Apr 13, 2009 - Re: Post Your Pic Here [6] Apr 13, 2009
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Re: do I dare disturb the universe? -- Jack's NaPoWriMo Thread
Consider changing the title to "Do I dare to eat a peach?". It really captures the pleasurable, delicious quality of your poetry.
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: The Inevitable War
If you could see what I see, you'd know that the world is in grave danger. Where sturdy forests once reside, now lives a foreshadow of what's to come. I ...
Apr 13, 2009 -
Re: Threnody's Review & Editing Establishment
Yes. Thanks.
Apr 12, 2009
