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Galerius

  • Narrative Poetry Re: <Deleted by Author>

    This isn't much of a poem. First of all, not knowing how to spell "dying" doesn't come off as very impressive, so have your title fixed as soon as you ...

    Apr 24, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: YWS New Automatic Feature

    Roe v Wade , d00d.

    Apr 23, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I am the wild horse

    I'm still working on making my poems more consistent, but I tried to make it as formal as I could without completely changing my original draft. Formal? As in...? It ...

    Apr 22, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: deleted

    I was standing amongst a large crowd when the rain began to fall While others ran indoors I remained outside The presence of the rain was soothing for me The ...

    Apr 20, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Points Up for Grabs

    800 points up for grabs. The only stipulation is that you have to be a really awesome person.

    Apr 19, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Don't think i'm going to finish

    Guess you won't finish. But since this has no reviews, allow me. The gentle lapping of the waves at me feet relaxed my body. Pictures of what had happened kept ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Tell Him

    He's all alone, just sitting there On his shoulders is the whole world's hate He bears the wind with a frontwards stare He's still alive but it's too late "Frontwards ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Light

    The sunshine breaking free Of cloud cover And the moon gleaming On frosty ground. Might as well say this now: capitalizing the first letter of every line is not necessary ...

    Apr 19, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 3am in the City

    Standing on the center line, incandescent lights casting orange on the wet pavement… There are good ways of trailing off a phrase slowly and there are bad ways. You just ...

    Apr 14, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: I'm Hungry...

    Thread, I command thee: Arise upon this scarred earth once more, claw out of the sunken dirt to embrace the waning light! Thanks.

    Apr 14, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Points Up for Grabs

    300 points up for grabs. Take 'em, or I'll eat 'em.

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Apr 13, 2009
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: do I dare disturb the universe? -- Jack's NaPoWriMo Thread

    Consider changing the title to "Do I dare to eat a peach?". It really captures the pleasurable, delicious quality of your poetry.

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Inevitable War

    If you could see what I see, you'd know that the world is in grave danger. Where sturdy forests once reside, now lives a foreshadow of what's to come. I ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Threnody's Review & Editing Establishment

    Yes. Thanks.

    Apr 12, 2009


Should we not walk? On our feet? The ones I now have again? I do like my feet. They are befittingly perambulatory.
— Pattern (Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson)