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Re: Island Tide
Evening wraps us in midsummer mist As it rolls into the shore from beneath placid waters, The sun still drawing its last fiery breath. Why bother telling the reader that ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: Journeys
A/N This was written because I'm so upset about leaving school. Hmm. Did you write this in a hurry and under emotional duress without editing much? That would explain much. ...
May 10, 2009 - Re: Southern Fire May 10, 2009
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Re: The After-Effect of Undercooked Oxygen
paper-cut ragdolls, devouring the dinner that they aren’t going to get and choking on their second servings of undercooked oxygen; Couple things blatantly wrong with this. I'm assuming they're devou
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Points Up for Grabs
1000 points up for grabs, you know the drill.
May 8, 2009 -
Re: i wish..
I wish everything would simply be a dream. And then i could always be with you. but then, Not all wishes do come true. I've promised myself that I'd grow ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Down in the Valley
Budding in sunlight an orchid so small, A flower of most radiant fragrance. "Small" is a filler word that means nothing and it just cheapens the imagery that you are ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: -Deleted-
When did I start feeling the weight of the world? When did the world get so cold? Why did I have to break your heart? You start off in an ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Helpless
So filled I can hardly breathe. Trying so hard but I'm never relieved. I'm trapped in this state. There's no one to talk to; they can't relate. I'm left to ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Someone new
Do you remember those careless days? when I couldn't wait to see you, But now you've changed in too many ways. Do you remember the things we used to do? ...
May 5, 2009 -
Re: Utterly attached {edited}
I dare wish our time hadn't ran by through our fingers, just like sand. Oh no, not the old "Time is grains of sand" metaphor. Don't begin your poem with ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Rubik's Cube
You puzzle me, You; Whose mind I can turn every angle, Caress every corner And still meet a dead end. Sounds more like a labyrinth than a Rubik's cube. A ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Are you afraid of the mods?
Heh. The stories I could tell...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Desire
Desire is Power. Burning brighter than any star, brining us closer to who we are. Stars burn, blah blah. It's an old image, puts nothing new on the table. Give ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: cradling brains
Once, I held a human brain, a sad round thing - Chuck the "once" into the circular receptacle. It just adds a connotation of time passing for you, when the ...
Apr 27, 2009
