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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Island Tide

    Evening wraps us in midsummer mist As it rolls into the shore from beneath placid waters, The sun still drawing its last fiery breath. Why bother telling the reader that ...

    May 11, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Journeys

    A/N This was written because I'm so upset about leaving school. Hmm. Did you write this in a hurry and under emotional duress without editing much? That would explain much. ...

    May 10, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Southern Fire

    May 10, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The After-Effect of Undercooked Oxygen

    paper-cut ragdolls, devouring the dinner that they aren’t going to get and choking on their second servings of undercooked oxygen; Couple things blatantly wrong with this. I'm assuming they're devou

    May 10, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Points Up for Grabs

    1000 points up for grabs, you know the drill.

    May 8, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: i wish..

    I wish everything would simply be a dream. And then i could always be with you. but then, Not all wishes do come true. I've promised myself that I'd grow ...

    May 8, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Down in the Valley

    Budding in sunlight an orchid so small, A flower of most radiant fragrance. "Small" is a filler word that means nothing and it just cheapens the imagery that you are ...

    May 8, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: -Deleted-

    When did I start feeling the weight of the world? When did the world get so cold? Why did I have to break your heart? You start off in an ...

    May 8, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Helpless

    So filled I can hardly breathe. Trying so hard but I'm never relieved. I'm trapped in this state. There's no one to talk to; they can't relate. I'm left to ...

    May 7, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Someone new

    Do you remember those careless days? when I couldn't wait to see you, But now you've changed in too many ways. Do you remember the things we used to do? ...

    May 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Utterly attached {edited}

    I dare wish our time hadn't ran by through our fingers, just like sand. Oh no, not the old "Time is grains of sand" metaphor. Don't begin your poem with ...

    May 1, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Rubik's Cube

    You puzzle me, You; Whose mind I can turn every angle, Caress every corner And still meet a dead end. Sounds more like a labyrinth than a Rubik's cube. A ...

    May 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Are you afraid of the mods?

    Heh. The stories I could tell...

    Apr 30, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Desire

    Desire is Power. Burning brighter than any star, brining us closer to who we are. Stars burn, blah blah. It's an old image, puts nothing new on the table. Give ...

    Apr 29, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: cradling brains

    Once, I held a human brain, a sad round thing - Chuck the "once" into the circular receptacle. It just adds a connotation of time passing for you, when the ...

    Apr 27, 2009


You are all the colours in one, at full brightness.
— Jennifer Niven, 'All the Bright Places'