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Galerius

  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Man of Many Words

    Hi bailecielo, My heart is slowly lit, by words expressed with wit. But I'll remain on guard, for love is yet too hard. Already I can tell that this is ...

    May 19, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Black

    Quietloud, This poem tries too hard and ends up falling flat on its face as a result. Black shadows dance under pitch-black skies Black words spoken through angry black lies ...

    May 19, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: I'm Hungry...

    Sh'yea! Thanks.

    May 19, 2009
  • Archive Re: Academy for Heroes-In-Training

    Rummaged around my pocket, felt my fingers grasp the pocketknife and cigarettes. Not today, Self. Today's a day to look your best. Finally, my skin touched the plastic canister. Found ...

    May 18, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Runaway

    She knew why leaving was the only option she had left. Why such awkward line breaks? It's ugly and constantly reminds the reader that he's reading a poem and not ...

    May 17, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Lin's Reviews

    "Southern Fire", lyric poetry. Thanks.

    May 16, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: In the Wake Before the Dawn

    There was fire in the heavens. The aurora blazed overhead, bathing the frozen Baja peninsula in vibrant colour. It was somewhat beautiful. But for Rob Reynolds and Dana Sentrosi, it ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: PAMLOST - A complete short story.

    Please do check the date next time.

    May 15, 2009
  • OOC Archive Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training

    Name: Self Explanatory Gender: Still unknown after several guesses Age: 19.9 years Ancestor: Edward Cullen from Twilight Alliance: Mercenary, fights for whomever s/he feels will be most profitable at

    May 15, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dream

    Anyway, I came up with some random lines off the top of my head. Then I'm going to advise throwing this away right now. Submitting "random" thoughts and bragging that ...

    May 14, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Where is My Savior Now?

    Twisted and perverted vines ensnare victims of wrongdoing. Wrongdoing? Such an abstract concept sandwiched uncomfortably between a tangible image and a vague ending to the stanza. Don't torment the re

    May 13, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Myself

    Burning muscles scream in rage, bloody fingernails tear in pain. I'm slowly ripping my past away, every vain by fucking vain. The verbs and adjectives you use could have worked ...

    May 13, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: deleated

    Working title. Let me know if you have any better ideas. Yes, that's a very bad title considering that by saying "Pure Darkness", you emphasize only one point of your ...

    May 12, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Love Is

    Love is letting you pick your favorite film Titanic because he wants to see the smile on your face. The cliche here is almost physically painful. "Girls like Titanic, boys ...

    May 11, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: disease

    Oh this disease, This terrible disease! I’m so difficult to please, Yet so easily diseased! The second line has nothing to do with the three around it, from the reader's ...

    May 11, 2009


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